Atkins Haiku Friday!

[cleochatra]

A haiku is a short-form of three lines in the following way:

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

An example:

Writing haiku? Like
roping funny steer. It's one
sillybull, then some.

[ladyinred]

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Give me some chicken
Afraid of flu I am not
Carbs do more damage

Like this? Not very funny. Hmmm. I'll work on that.

[cleochatra]

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Funny isn't a requisite! It's the fun of writing them that makes them so special! Yours is great!

I might be large, but
God loved me so much He made
more of me to love.


That one sounds depressing. *l* It's hard to go for wry wit in so few words.

I'm glad I'm thinning
This way of eating's winning
My husband's grinning.

[ladyinred]

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Cleo is my friend
wicked humour is her trait
that makes us spit food

Wannabethintoo
likes to run amuk through all
journals on this Board

Are they supposed to rhyme?

Fat is not taboo
it is good for me and you
this is very true

[wannabethintoo]

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I am wannabe
I like my lovely knick knacks
And don't be touching

[cleochatra]

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Lady's penchant for
saying unexpected things
Makes me laugh out loud.

Wannabe! You are
truly one dedicated
to studies amok.

[ladyinred]

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Yeah. We got the memo. You don't share your stuff. We can't touch your stuff. got it, got it.

[cleochatra]

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No kidding, Lady. You'd think we took her brozed booties away or something. *holds them up* By the way, do you like them?

[ladyinred]

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Love 'em. But put them down. Quick! She'll make you write lines for touching her stuff. Even if you don't take her class. Please refer to memo entitled "Don't touch my stuff" to Everyone, from Wannabe.

[wannabethintoo]

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Yeah. We got the memo. You don't share your stuff. We can't touch your stuff. got it, got it.

Yeah you got it....now don't forget it.

[wannabethintoo]

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Cleo! Put those down. Read the memo again. Out loud....so everyone can hear.

[cleochatra]

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"...Go to the drycleaners
Pick up photos
Take dog to groomer..."

[ladyinred]

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*Snort*

[lots2lose]

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damn the evil scale
it controls my emotions
off to the closet!!!!!!

[cleochatra]

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*clapping* Woo! That was a good one, lots! *snap snap snap*